Monday 21 May 2012

A Pirates Adventures

Once upon a time there was an old homeless pirate that had just a ship. He loves sailing around the seven seas. One day a man said to the pirate "Would you like to come and do some tricks at my fair?"
The pirate asked, "What kind of tricks?"
"Just come with me," said the man.
So the pirate went with him to the fair. When they got there the man showed the pirate the wonderful and interesting tricks. The pirate was then escorted to his large, plain room.

The night finally arrived when the pirate had to perform his tricks. He had been practising for months and couldn't wait to show off his amazing tricks.

When he went out onto the stage and did some of his tricks the crowd went wild with excitement. Unfortunately half-way through his performance, a spaceship flew down and landed right smack bang in the middle of his show. The pirate was suddenly faced with 10 green men from outer space...

Come back next time to read what happens to the pirate and the green men.

5 comments:

  1. Wow hayden that is such a funny and interesting story you wrote

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  2. Dear Hayden,

    I am excited to read what happens next! What were some of the tricks the Pirate did?

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  3. Hayden,
    This is such an exciting story and I can't wait to read more! What were some of the tricks the pirate did at the fair?

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  4. THANKS FOR THE COMMENT KATHERINE

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  5. wow Hayden what a awesome story your pirates adventure

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